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  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Nice word choices. Sad, but lovely. Congrats, Mystic Rose!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:43:00 PM
    I love the language you used here, Vie, to contrast the festivities with her dementia. BIG congrats in the contest, dear.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Congrats on your win my dear Vie

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:25:00 AM
    great write and win Rose...congrats

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:15:00 AM
    This is beautiful and sad rose...reminded me of grandma.... congratulations

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:21:00 AM
    sad ..congratulations flower xx

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:20:00 AM
    Oh yes indeed my friend, yes indeed...

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:45:00 PM
    You set the mood very well. Congratulations. Gary

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:07:00 AM
    You captured the theme of dementia perfectly. "Unstrung" was brilliant. Very best wishes, Linda x

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:25:00 AM
    Oh my! You do amaze me. Brilliant depiction of dementia.

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Sigh...this hit hard. Dementia is such a sensitive topic for me. This Tanka was powerful in its own right. Excellent job.

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Beautiful expressions of sadness and grief, Vie