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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 11:46:00 PM
    A very mythical and enchanting write, Cheri! I love the Lord Of The Rings, and I can still remember reading the Hobbit when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading this entertaining poem this evening! Fantastic work!...Thank you for the kind visit today. It really means a lot to me!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:10:00 PM
    Love Lord of the Rings and the Hobbit this poem was great Cheryl thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 3:03:00 PM
    Interesting lines penned in this one..I noticed that you dropped by ..Your comments are appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Great write, great metaphor. Smog can even be seen in our beautiful city of Perth these days, and it can only get worse, I enjoyed this one.....Peter

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 12:37:00 PM
    You are using a very clever metaphor here! As a Tolkien fan I appreciate the way you blend in your environmental message. Peace & Love Matthew Anish