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the empty house stands with broken windows and doors – a doll on the sill

12/5/13

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  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:08:00 AM

    wow, what a picture... SKAT

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:40:00 PM

    Congrats Debbie....

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 7:42:00 AM

    congratulations Debbie, very nice contrast

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 6:29:00 PM

    The doll on the sill is the killer here cher... A stunning and extremely compelling conclusion to the picture you have painted... I wager you have done one on canvas too huh? If not you certainly should...

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 3:05:00 PM

    very effective indeed! // congrats on your win // paul

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 11:48:00 AM

    congrats on your win friend Debbie ;) hugs ;)

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 1:06:00 AM

    Whoa.. Marvelous! Congrats on your fist place win!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 6:14:00 PM

    A brilliant Monoku, and a fabulous image bringing out thoughts of what could have happened here. Congratulations on your well deserved win - Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:19:00 PM

    What the!!!!! It's not fair to have professionals in these contests!! LOL Love it Deb!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:15:00 PM

    real atmosphere created with just a few words; an eerie image - congrats on your 1st place win :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:59:00 PM

    A haunting piece, congratulations Debbie.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:58:00 PM

    wow, this is GOOD stuff, Debs. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:37:00 PM

    - One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Debbie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:16:00 PM

    Wow!! Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 3:47:00 PM

    my dear Debbie... Congratulations on your win! ....a meaningful poem!! ..it hits my heart so well ..tHank you.. ^__^

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:54:00 PM

    ahh.......love it !! I had forgotten about this contest, ...it is a pleasure to be in such good company !! Congratulations Deb!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on first place in my contest. Sorry for the long delay in judging, eyesight problems. Constance

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 11:20:00 AM

    posted mine now-- sorry have to sleep now and ok will try not to jump! hugs back!

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:03:00 AM

    So much said here, so much that can be gathered from this monoku, Debbie! and yes, it is your little monkey being weird-- thank you for making me smile, yes, my current name on here is hard to remember, eh? now I am being fickle minded and I think I really will embarrass myself with the sonnet if ever I do write it, oops! I will peek here & there, sighs, me just still mulling over Linda-Marie's passing...thank you for putting me on the list--

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 3:05:00 AM

    a goosebumps arising monoku I'm so moved. Dutch Greetings. Elly

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