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Opposite

The sung was shimmering through 
the midnight sky,
The woman was saying hello whilst 
saying goodbye.
The screen was black whilst showing 
in white,
The room was dark but so bright.
The woman would drink whilst she 
was chewing,
The crowd would clap whilst they 
were booing.
The winter was almost here,
But summer was ever so near.
The man was sitting whilst on his 
feet.
The woman was alive but her heart 
didn't beat.

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  1. Date: 12/17/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Kaitlin , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 12:47:00 PM
    - Welcome to P-Soup, Kaitlin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 12:35:00 PM
    ps.. I like the opposite direction each thought took... my fav... the women drank, while chewing. .. alive, but not beating. ..wow!

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    Date: 12/5/2013 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou so much,took me a while to write it. I will join your contest now, thanks again.
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 12:33:00 PM
    Kaitlin, , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@