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hey joe i gotta gun

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need a singer. Up beat. Could be a hit!  My song ..don't plagiarize ~haha
I hear this in a Beyoncé or gaga , some like that. Come find me  , wonderful thing about this site , your songs, poetry is protected. It is a great place to be.  yvettemerci@yahoo.com 


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hey joe i gotta gun

  Hey Joe ,I gotta Gun, you know you better run, this time your woman shot you down
  ' anywhere you run you know she 's gotta gun..so go on baby try and hide.'
    no matter how far or how you play guitar it's me you'll never leave behind '
 Hey Joe I gotta gun , so you know you better run , You will never shoot your woman down

so you think I've messed around ?  Do ya ?   when it's you who goes downtown.. told Ya?

    Don't you know I once loved you ..baby   BG " shoot shoot baby "
      oh you said  that you 'd  be true baby.. BG " shoot shoot Baby "
       you'll never run from me , its my eyes you'll always see " saw ya .
         there will  be one like me you will always hear my song  Heard ya
           In your mind I do belong..cause you've have done me Joe, all wrong
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" Heyyy joe..I heard you shot your old lady down "   ~~~ Yes , you know I shot her , I caught her messing around with another man""  ~~~


 So..  go on and get out now.... 
     take all you brought in the door , you have done this thing before. 
      so go on and get your sin  , yes I know where you have been..
   look me once more in my eyes , don't you know I knew your lies
   But there's one thing you forgot.. you will always hear my voice..
   its too late , ..there's not a choice , It will haunt you every time 
   you'll try and leave me behind,  you will find you'll loose your mind ..baby

     repeat 1st .. 
 Hey Joe I gotta gun you know you better run, this time your old lady shot you down
    anywhere you run you know she's gotta gun ..so go on baby try and hide...
     no matter how far or how you play guitar its me you'll never leave behind..
    hey Joe I gotta gun .. you know you better run. You will never shoot your old lady down.

 so you think I've messed around /  do ya ?when it's you I see downtown.. told ya .
What kinda crack you on ? It will not take me that long , you will run and you will run
 One shot and you go down ,  this time your old lady shot you down BG Shoot Shoot Baby "

 Hey Joe you better go , I think it's time you know ..your old lady ..she has got a gun.
 I heard she caught you with another girl, and heard she is a He, Thank God  your woman ...she's not after me...I think you knew.. your old lady sees. 

Hey Joe ya better go , ya better run and hide , this time your old lady gonna shoot you down.  BG " Shoot Shoot Baby "

Ya  know I heard she's gotta gun , so you know ya better run , go on and get out of town. told ya .


"Heyy joe..I heard you shot your woman down " ~~~~

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:41:00 PM
    Jimi Hendrix would be proud. Nice work Shanity!

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you! I love The song "Hey Joe " the man before his time.
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well Thank-you ! It is my Fav by Jimi ~ the man before his time.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 12:55:00 PM
    i knew it was a song from the start.. and i loved it because it contains the kind of love i'm use to. the kind that kills. i hope you visit my piece and my latest will compliment this wonderful song of yours.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/11/2013 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you "The Situation " yes indeed ! I do appreciate your visit~
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:30:00 AM
    Wow u hav gunned down a gay twotimer partner eh with yor fine smart n smarting songlike refrains poem. Swell job u did. Way to go shanity. Warm wishes

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/11/2013 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sweet heart !
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 5:11:00 PM
    cool you should read my poems too

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/6/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will ! Thank-you .
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 2:46:00 PM
    I loved it! Dynamic and gunfighter-girl-like, and of course it carries your own personal style of writing! Two thumbs up. a 7 and many smiles! G.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/6/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you G. I have the music I can put down , I hear it !! It's kind of gaga, or Beyoncé blues, maybe country!
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 11:54:00 AM
    - Drama .... !! - Actually, it reminds me of a song ... but I do not remember which .... - One voltage power and dramatic poem - Really good work Shanity !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/5/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you sweet heart ! If I can get the right singer...and I have some music in mind, It may just be good enough! It could be pop, country , indie. Many things . Inspired By Jimmy Hendrix , "Hey Joe" I heard you shot your woman down" I have serious problem with a virus, or hacker , sorry I have not replied too many comments made:(