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Monoku 5 - Twilight

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Monoku 5 - Twilight

	
	
	Monoku 5 - Twilight
	
	
	come to me twilight... become night’s silver full moon 






         Written 12.04.2013



	
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:40:00 AM
    it is beautiful, Jack.... LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/11/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    As always, thank you for reading my work... Jack
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 3:53:00 PM
    I read this again and liked it even MORE

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:18:00 PM
    another beauty!! I sure am struggling for the perfect monoku for that one contest.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/5/2013 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    They aren't exactly easy. Seems like they would be. After all, it's just one line. I'm looking forwards to reading yours...
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Jack you do have a true talent with the Haiku!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/5/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again, Joseph... Jack
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Beautiful. BG

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/5/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Barbara... Jack
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Fantastic! Embrace the moonlit nights and its depth!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/5/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake, as always... Jack
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 3:31:00 AM
    - Beautiful, haiku Jack - you will get 4 from me :) - Not as nice as yours ... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)