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  1. Date: 12/15/2013 12:01:00 AM

    Beautiful monoku philosophically worded. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:24:00 PM

    They do don't they :) Lovely one breath you expressed so much beauty.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:22:00 AM

    another excellent verse from one of my favorite poet here on soup. very powerful...good luck in the contest ;: advance Merry Christmas!! hugssss

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Another beauty penned by you Gail, absolutely enjoyed reading this gem.. love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 11:36:00 AM

    Looks like something good to put inside a fortune cookie.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 10:53:00 AM

    I like this poem. You say so much with just 12 words.

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 10:25:00 PM

    Wow, I love this short but wonderfully well thought out poem. There's a lot of depth in it.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:25:00 PM

    I enjoyed your verse this evening. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 3:47:00 PM

    a very positive flow in this poem. Light reigning over dark!

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 3:47:00 PM

    and I hope your Christmas is looking bright.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Thank you Gail, for the nice comment on Craig's blog. Sometimes a certain person makes a difference. Linda

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 10:27:00 AM

    Beautiful small one! I wish the best in the contest! :) G.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 12:39:00 AM

    Excellent. Touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs All the best.

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:37:00 PM

    - Touching .... beautiful. . . Wish you luck in the contest, Gail! - 2 fingers X!! - Have a great weekend - <3 U! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:29:00 PM

    well written one line deep and moving work excellent!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:09:00 PM

    Hi Gail, so much can be said in one line when written by your pen. Nice one. Good luck in the contest....peter

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 3:28:00 PM

    Hi Gail brilliant as always, good luck in the contest, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Beautiful insight Gail, trials of faith surely bring with them tears of anguish as the light of the manifestation is birth as truth's joy into higher reality. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 12:44:00 PM

    very well expressed Gail...hugs

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 11:55:00 AM

    A masterpiece!

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 10:42:00 PM

    This is a masterful write my friend, you have completed a tremendous poem here Gail! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this evening! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:32:00 PM

    I admire your wording in this monoko Gail, good luck, Blessings Carl

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 3:04:00 PM

    Very nicely said. Enjoy all your work so much Gail. Even your comments are written so beautifully. Thank You!

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Wow, a lot said. Good job!

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 5:52:00 AM

    Impressive Monoku Poem Gail. Well Done !! Anne

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 12:16:00 AM

    Great poem in monoku form.Gail, you are great.I think we should thank yasmin also for making us try this form. When i ponder over this line i could think great meaning very in-depth. This is a philosophical statement.(: ) Poet.Undertaker.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 11:26:00 PM

    A wonderful Line you have written here Gail. Hope it is a win for you...Peter

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 9:18:00 PM

    A powerful statement Gail...great job...

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 8:00:00 PM

    Exquisite line Gail, nice to hear from you, hope all is well, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:55:00 PM

    Very thoughtful creative Monoku, Gail