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Haiku X 22 - Winter X 4

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Haiku X 22 - Winter X 4


        1.          White silver crystals
                     winter coat over a garden bench
                     Summer dreams
                        
                            ***

        2.         Outside the window
                    the virgin untouched purity
                    the snow is here

                             ***

        3.         Angels in the snow
                    White crystals flashes
                    The children excited
 
                              ***

        4.         Blue gray clouds
                    Yellow ring around the moon
                    More snow coming
 





    04.12.2013
    A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 3/4/2014 4:31:00 AM
    Anne Lise, thank you for your welcoming message and your kind words about my initial haiku posted. I will participate as much as I can. Your haiku was very enjoyable to read, I'm living in Thailand at the moment and felt a cool breeze here as I read your 4 poems. Les Cohen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/4/2014 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Pleased to hear some words from you and Thailand. -( I visited Thailand two years ago.....lovely land ) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/18/2013 9:58:00 AM
    Beautiful sets of serial haiku worded with extreme beauty. Loved always, my beautiful friend, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/18/2013 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 5:09:00 PM
    Hi Anne-Lise, I still Love those darned Haiku and I still don't know why. I think it could be their simplicity. How you can all get your vision over in three lines is beyond me. I mean me, it takes twenty odd words to say good morning. Loved the images in your four Haiku. Skillfully written. My brain just isn't on the right wavelength I think. Anyway, I really enjoyed the read. Have a good evening. Catch you later. Your Friend ....MIKE.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/17/2013 2:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments Mike. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:03:00 PM
    Wonderful image provoking old memories and creating new visions.Love your work A.L.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/16/2013 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for pleasant visit and nice comments Michael . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 1:10:00 PM
    I must admit that I really hadn't much appreciation for Haiku until I read these. They are so concise and marvelous in their descriptions--evoking strong feelings in my poetic soul. Thank you so much.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/10/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 12:56:00 PM
    I love when a poem paints a picture and sets a mood. Thanks

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2013 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Patrick. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Excellent chain of haiku this is my very dear friend Anne Lise. So love it and enjoyed. thank u so much for the vicarious experience provided by your very beautiful/creative words in this amazing poem of yours. Thank u so much! love and biggest hugs, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Well written Haikus Anne Lise . The first snow is always so beautiful . Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Anne. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 9:27:00 PM
    The ice crystals seem so fragile and simple at first glance, but closer inspection shows there true beauty and engineering. ~Kilmer

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:15:00 PM
    my favorite is the first one. PERFECT on a day like today.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Loved the imagery. Best wishes Linda x

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 8:00:00 PM
    wonderful imagery Anne Lise they brought a smile to my face good pen Shadow x smile hug

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Hi Anne-Lise Brrr making me cold with this descriptive write, all the best Poetowen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - It's COLD in the tiny Norway, Owen :))) - Thanks for pleasant visit my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:48:00 AM
    you take me there with sheer winter glow, anne...am loving this one!..huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 4:51:00 AM
    So that's it, eh? Thank you.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Gerald. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 4:23:00 AM
    warm winter feelings

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Yes I've heard that too, about the yellow ring around the moon mean showers are coming, and in the winter that means more snow! This is a tremendous poem my friend! I loved reading this illustrious piece Anne Lise, Great Work!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 3:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Russell. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 8:28:00 PM
    You speak of snow,........but you warmed my heart with these beautiful haikus !!! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 3:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Carrie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Nicely visual loved the lines it is simply put beautiful loved again, read it twice. cheri

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 3:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Wonderful words Anne-Lise. I would hate to have snow here in WA, but you make it sound so nice...Liked this one very much....peter

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2013 3:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Peter. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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