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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:33:00 AM

    ha I like the clean earth... But, some how I think this rain keeps missing Texas, :)...Linda

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 2:13:00 PM

    Short and sweet well done. best wishes. Pete.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Awesome one line Jewel! Yasmin...You are a great writer! chuck

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Constance will enjoy this! :) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 5:11:00 AM

    Hi Yasmin lovely words I like, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 2:23:00 AM

    You expressed great beauty here in one single line. Stopping by to greet you Yasmin and say I love you... Thanks always for being there!! Huggs, gautami

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 3:49:00 PM

    You always impress me with your descriptive vocabulary, sweet friend. I love when you call me blue eyes even though my eyes are not exactly blue!!! they are grey or green tinged.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/11/2013 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey, it's Guatami there!!
    phookan Avatar gautami phookan Date: 12/10/2013 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love this here... Hey, green eyes! :) It's lovely to be among friends again!!!
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 4:28:00 PM

    rather to dust things up.

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 11:20:00 PM

    And we definitely need a lot of these crystal globules to come and clean-up our dirty buildings, roads, cars, etc. recently! But now, here where I live, we just get snow for precipitation! But it is quite beautiful when it's falling though, such calm and peaceful snow, cold and irritating when you want to go somewhere, but beautiful while you are in your house just watching it near a fire in the fireplace with hot cocoa! I drift, your poem is masterfully written my friend! I love it, Great Work!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 8:17:00 AM

    Fantastic creative Monoku, Yasmin

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:22:00 AM

    - So lovely and true, my friend Yasmin - Luck in contest. - <3 U !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)