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MENTAL TATTOO: A Collaboration With Eileen Ghali

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MENTAL TATTOO: A Collaboration With Eileen Ghali

                                            I breathe in the fragrance of you; 
                                             You're the rose of a new tattoo.
                                             Fashioned firm and fair in kind,
                                              Never will you leave my mind.

                                          On your heart I am meant to stay;
                                               My love for you is on display.
                                                I'm a rose in passion's hue;
                                               Symbol of love touching you.


           



                                                      ©2013 Honestly JT
                                                      ©2013 Eileen Ghali                                             

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  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:21:00 PM

    PJ and Eileen....this is so beautiful! You described love perfectly. Hugs

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 11:10:00 PM

    Justice.........LOVED working with you! :) Thanks for asking me to work on this lovely piece. :) I'm honored. Hugs

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:44:00 PM

    great flow with this one wonderful expression of love

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Eileen, PJ...wow....sooo beautiful. This collaboration should be in some contest somewhere. OMGoodness this is lovely. Going to my favs; and that's a hard list to get on lol.

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:31:00 PM

    a mental tattoo like that one will not so easily fade!! NIcely done, you two . I hope you can also do another Balsic stanza (whatever it is called) It is difficult to do one and not seem trite because the syllable count is so limiting. I am not completely satisfied with mine either.