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VISIT TO JACKSONVILLE BEACH BAR

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VISIT TO JACKSONVILLE BEACH BAR

Smoke-filled noisy bar,
debauched disciples of dance,
I do not fit in.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:35:00 AM
    James, the imagery did feel uncomfortable.... xox..LINDA

    Tidd Avatar Jim Tidd
    Date: 12/11/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A group of very drunk dancers were nearby. I don't drink much. Wasn't judging them, but they seemed oblivious to others.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 2:52:00 AM
    Do you never dance or was it too special (^_^)

    Tidd Avatar Jim Tidd
    Date: 12/11/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I still like to slow dance.