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I sail boat

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I sail boat


As drops from the clouds cease,
I stroll to meet a friend of mine
a paper boat in hand, a local boy
runs from the PDS shop queue, 
looks for water to sail his boat,
tried in a small dirty puddle,
embarrassed to see,the boat stay still!
tried in the nearby ditch, already choked!
Cursed heavens, a way out of embarrassment!
Looked around little boy, my gaze, he dislikes!
fellow doesn’t want others follow his passion!
I started walking away poker faced, 
Fellow jumped with a smile believing
I know not his embarrassment, got into
his fantasy world to try another fun….

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  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:36:00 AM
    Sometimes fantasy becomes reality.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 3:59:00 PM
    oh this is funny. It is exactly how people act when they know they have been seen failing like this. Good one.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Morning friend, I thought I liked the new avatar but it's all blurry, wiser? ;) LOL, a year or 2 OLDER [me] see that message below mine TOTALLY disregard it the 'person' has been around for years DOING what ever the heck he/she thinks they are doing, the best course is no response at all! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Love your keen sense of observation here Jenish...This brings back fond memories as well...As youngsters we used to catch Salamanders and Newts, place them in a fallen maple leaf and give them a nice little boat ride...believe it or not, they seemed to enjoy it! - Tim

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/4/2013 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thats great Tim.Thanks for adding more value to my poem.(: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:44:00 PM
    This brings back my memories. As I child I used to Gomati River of my town Dwarika, Jenish

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/2/2013 11:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dr.Mehta, thank you. (: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 1:06:00 PM
    Great poem, Undertaker. A clear painting of a child's play. An observant poet. Thanks for sharing this childish story with me. JM

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/2/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You. (: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 11:44:00 AM
    Wow nice story poem. Yor words followd d boy in a swell way. Enjoyd readin poet!

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/2/2013 6:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Zaynub.(: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 11:08:00 AM
    - Can do lots with vivid imagination ..... nice poem P.U. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/2/2013 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lisa. (: ) Jenish.