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A Vampire's kiss

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A Vampire's kiss

The translucent look of his pale flesh
His eyes held mine they did enmesh
His fingers long and thin, me supine 
As upon my blood he then did dine

That first kiss almost hypnotic
From frail frame yet so erotic
Mesmerised as teeth pieced vein
Subtle, surprising, I felt no pain

As my life force poured it left me weak
His strength now grew, my future bleak
Immortal soul he promised in trade
For that first kiss is what he paid

In my bed I wait for night
I can’t be seen in broad daylight
I feed on unwary men
Until I am fully nourished again

For human blood I daily crave
Yet my want is peace inside my grave
To suck another life force away
I relinquished my death the price I pay.

© GG 2.12. 2013

Contest entry Poems from the Vampire

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:48:00 PM
    I love your take on this subject, and congratulation on your fine win. Warm hugs and smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 4:35:00 PM
    I love this poem, Mandy! It is dark and sensual, and very well expressed. This was a great entry for the vampire contest! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/10/2013 2:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always a pleasure reading your work Kelly xx
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 4:48:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Mandy

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/10/2013 2:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks doc xx
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 4:28:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Mandy

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/10/2013 2:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph xx
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 1:05:00 PM
    Another gem, from you golden girl, will be hard to beat, this. You truly do bring life to a somewhat dead subject...you sure do amaze when turning out the poetry you do, you are on a roll Mandy, long May you reign

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/2/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha I like that 'bring life to a somewhat dead subject' good one harry thank you xx
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 12:34:00 PM
    - Garlic .... !!!!! - A fabulous well written poem about this topic Mandy !! - Two thumbs up for you in the contest ...... no, three!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/2/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    no kisses for you if you are on the garlic lol thanks luv xx
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:37:00 AM
    great write Mandy...good luck in the contest...hugs

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    Date: 12/2/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks joseph xx
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Fantastic take on the contest, Mandy

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/2/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ram much appreciated xx