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Haiku 103

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Haiku 103

	
	
	
	
	
	Haiku 103
	
	
	my being’s
	deepbreath    I slowly
	e  x  h  a  l  e
	
	
	
	 
	

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  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:35:00 PM
    like what you did with the spacing of exhale nicely done

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/3/2013 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Joseph. It was an experiment... Jack
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:27:00 PM
    I hope the day improved as it went along Jack.

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:43:00 PM
    I like how you used the spacing on this one. A long time ago I used the word Exhale with that kind of spacing too!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/2/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It just felt like a good thing to do... Jack
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:20:00 AM
    ...indeed, Jack. Strong Haiku.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/2/2013 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Drake. I'm looking forward to this weekend's show... Jack
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Take a deep breath of that cool air it will invigorate you. I hope the gray clouds part and you are flooded with glorious sunshine Jack.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/1/2013 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Richard. It's just been one of those days... Jack
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 3:58:00 PM
    - S A D - Jack - well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 12/1/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is rather sad. I think it's just the gray skies here... Jack