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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:06:00 PM
    Yes very nice Sis what Kathy said & you know me I'm a sucker for repeated lines ;) Congrad's on your win!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:06:00 AM
    Congratulations Cyndi love xx

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:36:00 AM
    Cyndi - Bring it forth, the light and truth of your poetry. I didn't read one cliche, if there is one - you twisted it into words never heard before. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:51:00 PM
    A very lovely write for this time of year, hope all is well Cyndi hugs xxx

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Right on. Go with the clichés sometimes, or else it becomes too cliché trying to stay away from clichés(besides, nowadays, technically, every word can be a cliché on its own(I checked -- 40 words per month are being added to a global list of clichés! Ha!). It is becoming cliché simply to write poems. Good on you for merging Paganism with Christianity .... especially since the genesis of Christianity is Paganism.

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 2:45:00 PM
    ;-D okay, okay, my Multi-theism merged with Christian, and, oh well, it came from a personal space, too. Hope you like, but not different enough, I know. More than a mite cliché. Thanks for the nudge. This felt good to write.