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  1. Date: 12/5/2013 8:47:00 AM
    This is a sensual and erotic take on the vampire story. But it is still eerie and you can feel the fear creeping through the lines. Well done my friend. This is a winner.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Vampire tale - very unique for this website! Remember to keep garlic on you! You never know what will happen! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Wow...Love the erotic take here and why you gotta include lines 9 & 10?? Don't you realized I'm an old man with a weak heart? I'm feeling dizzy now, please help me...Come directly to my house and nurse me back to health...

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 12/4/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Line 11 is a knock-out...
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 9:21:00 PM
    my lovely beloved ROSE... you are my deary angelica.... though this is so scary but i have to tell you that you are my greatest POETESS... :) :) :) thank you deary Vie for sharing everything :) I LOVE YOU :) SK

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Hello Mystic Rose , sorry it's taken a while to drop a reply to your kind words. Just I've had a few stresses going on. Anyway indeed even through the horrid blood spilled in wars , God works for the greater good , blessings Andy

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 3:59:00 PM
    really sets the atmosphere , loved it :) x

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Wonderful wonderful....yikes....vampires creep me out....

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:01:00 AM
    very beautifully drawn piece

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:22:00 AM
    I love it, one of the best of the vampire weapons garlic is! Also a good metal cross, wood ones they just burn! But wear gloves with metal cross else they will burn you! This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and awesome poem this morning! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 11:31:00 PM
    Woah an amazing dark poem with twists. I admired its strange effects as if a vampire lover. Fondest hugggs.:-) and thanx

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:59:00 PM
    It's really very scary but apt entry for the vampire contest, vie

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Interesting contest entry...Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 5:11:00 PM
    terrrific rendition of the theme, my vie... you're not ded, just deeply hynotized by that vam-snake charmer... delicious work, , really!!... grazie and huggs

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Wow what a poem My dear mysitc!!! I'm sure you will win this contest no problem! great poem! Apologizes for not commenting lately! Forgive my my loving rose! happy Thanksgiving by the way my dear, hope the best from you and hope to hear from you soon! great poem my dear Mystic! Love and kisses and warm embraces all around for my my darling mystic! Love you! :) xoxoxo

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 1:50:00 PM
    - Proficient M.R. ! - A winning poem! - Come on quick visit .... so that I see you are still living :))))) - Have a great first week in December. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 1:20:00 PM
    † I Was Thinking While Reading Of The Emotions Perhaps, In That A Lady Be Her Night ? Going Zombie To Get Past Another Heart's Threshing Floor Moment So To Speak, Sweet Beautiful Vienna ˜ Or Also A Child Being Sexually Abused By A Lost As Heartless Life ? Yet We Find In This Classic Flavoured Poe, Her Vampire's Note; Big Ku's To You ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John