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December

it's december;
holiday thoughts chill me
more so than this breeze
as it wraps me up
in winter's blanket

i want to be like the trees
colorless and bare
of everything
that weighs me down

i want to dance free
in the wind
not snap
like dead branches
in storm's fury

i'm snapping though
and it's only december
i can feel the weight
of winter's wrath
pulling me down
grounding me

i am falling
blizzard-like
more than a few inches deep
everything is turning white
fading fast
within death's grasp
i am december's ending

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  1. Date: 5/6/2014 12:59:00 PM
    I admire how you throw yourself into the Storm, and you always emerge more meaningful. Great emotional expression Sandra. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 4/23/2014 5:37:00 PM
    I love this one Sandra, even though it makes me shiver with your cold over there. Well written, my friend Peter

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 12:02:00 AM
    That last verse is so metaphoric with the hints of intense bereavement. I feel your pain. I've been there. Hugs :)

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 9:09:00 AM
    roll on summer and i bet the poetry is just as good...happy new year Sandra.....

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Very expressive and descriptive work..The personification is a nice touch..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 3:49:00 PM
    sandra I love this…. it is very well written….David

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Hi Sandra...very nice write ...hope you had a good Christmas....best wishes

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Hello Sandra! Very poignant. Real emotions are surfacing. I can relate somehow. Hope soon enough you can get off the phase and just look back with a shrug and a smile. Count me as your friend anytime. Christmas love & hugs, Wendy

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Wendy...I hope you had an awesome Christmas...Happy New Years to you my new friend! Hugs Sandy
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Hope you are well--this storm today is hitting you now--I'm waiting for it!!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    getting over a stomach bug slowly and my daughter is getting much better...hope your holiday was wonderful...hugs
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:59:00 PM
    Hi Sandra, Well crafted hypnotic write.. Ken

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Ken :)
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Great write about the 12th month! Original and delightful read! My Best, chuck

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Chuck....hugs
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Wow! I love december,it was d month I came forth and a month of celebrations and unity. Though used by the crooked ones to do harm on others. Thanks for your lovely comments. Love, Based on Belief

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bob...december can be as wonderful as any other month...i just have sadness tied to mine at times...hugs
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 4:01:00 PM
    sandy, I am going home for the day. Just stopped by to say hello on my way off . I went through my contest winners but have no time to answer other comments. Sure hope your daughter is doing ok! luv, Andrea

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea...not 100% yet but much better for sure...hugs :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 12:52:00 AM
    Excellent. Good allegorical poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much...hugs :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Beautiful..yet sad...hoping your December and holidays are happy ones...God bless...

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you...hope you had a very merry holiday! Hugs
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:42:00 PM
    gosh, sandy, I could read your poetry all afternoon. You never become mundane. You are just so good and this ending line is total eloquence.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the big smile Andrea :) hugs, hope all is good!
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Nice read Sandra. I hope the sun will shine in your heart soon, underneath all troubles the sun is shining brightly. Just have to take a trip within....peter

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter...was a long trying month but things are getting better...hope you are doing good! Hugs
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Hoping this is just a temporary moment feeling this way, and that you will feel a touch of sunshine soon!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie...sometimes life throws the bitter at you, you just take it in, cry a little, laugh alot and spit it back out in poetry :) Hugs hope you had a great Christmas!
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Tremendous & hard-hitting write. When can a saddened heart become strong enough to turn a frozen December into a blooming May? Depends on how full the "glass"...excellent job!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake...hard to believe i have been gone almost a month...lot's of catching up to do...hope your Christmas was Merry and bright :) hugs
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Good morning Sandra, I hope you are safe under a warm blanket of love.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/27/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It has gotten cold here as well and the snow is starting to come down pretty heavy.
    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/27/2013 6:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    even the plug in kind aren't warming me from this air... hello Richard :)
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