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My Christmas Profiled

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My Christmas Profiled

Elation perched by the fire, thinking Christmas
Watching me dress my wishes red, gazing at Santa’s sack
My wings are just mending, but the snow-queen beckons
And so I must rush, my feet flying, and wings folded tight

We dance the nights out, flirting with desires
The moon coloured blush from the rapture of secrets
Our whispering pines know these little rituals
And the tree-god smiles down, radiant from giving

The woods are lit high on elation’s ways 
Probabilities twinkling in and out of eager minds
Limpets of promises cling delicate in the shadows
Every soul euphoric, from forgiveness and love

I skip around Santa’s sack, waiting for realities
Running with the unicorns till my wings are healed
The reindeer hands me snow secrets from a forgotten post
Its music from the heavens, the white chorus of our subconscious

Souls waking up, remembering ancient mysteries
Moving in the intuitive dance from myriad veiled truths
And Santa rides on, smiling at the wide-eyed dreams
While I run with the unicorns, waiting for my wings to mend…

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  1. Date: 2/17/2014 3:12:00 AM

    Rereading another of yours I liked a lot, Bindu. This one just so magical.

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 1:09:00 PM

    Wow, Am I the peanut brain---this is really moving and another fav and I don't go crazy facing poems but !!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/11/2014 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Craig:) And, you write awesome, I love those poems I have commented...
    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 1/10/2014 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW--a peanut brain cuz I haven't been visiting your poems enough!!
  1. Date: 1/6/2014 8:16:00 PM

    that's beautiful. your words are like another world, and i love getting lost in it. thank you!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/6/2014 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Vivi!
  1. Date: 1/2/2014 10:26:00 PM

    gosh, this is so fantastical. the imagery of the unicorns and the reindeer and the white chorus from the heavens. wow, what an amazing poem.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/3/2014 5:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Andrea:)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 11:55:00 AM

    - Bindu, all the best to you - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/18/2013 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Anne Lise, wish you a perfect Christmas as well:) hugs...
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:37:00 AM

    helllo bindu... just wabted to greet you today.. huggs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/18/2013 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Nette, its always lovely to hear from you, hope your day is going well...hugs..
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Dreamy ..enchanting and beautiful Tnks for the journey through verse and for your kindred comments on my humble poems.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/16/2013 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Charmain!
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Dropping in with I'm thinking of you note, and a hug to warm you through xxx

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/16/2013 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs back to you, dear Vienna, thank you:)
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 2:35:00 PM

    This is a wonderful write you crafted here within your talented words luv. Have a nice weekend. Hugs and love, Gail

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/16/2013 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Gail, hugs!!!
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 10:51:00 PM

    Hi Bindu, haven't seen much of you lately. I hope you are well and enjoying friends and family.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I meant visit not vist.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes having a nice week with my mom, brother, sister , cousin and nieces. Flew out from BC to Ontario gor a pre Christmas vist.
    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/13/2013 2:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its been busy here, loads at work and stuff... but otherwise yes, I am having a whale of a time with my girls:) thank you for asking. hope all well with you and yours...
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 3:40:00 PM

    your christmas is fantastical, just like your poetry, bindu. You are unique!!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/11/2013 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Andrea!
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 7:46:00 PM

    wow, wow... straight to my faves..... and it has nothing to do with the awesome unicorn ending... a perfect 10 poem....love the awakened feeling..luv...Linda

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/11/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear Linda, you made my day!!! Love and hugs
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 1:39:00 PM

    are you almpost have a feverish moment, binduu.. hafta light ,y fire!.. na,aste and huggs!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/11/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) hugs to you, dear Nette!
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Bindu...I loved the spirit of this..from the magic of Santa's sack to the spirit of the season of forgiveness and love....wonderful poem.....

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Donna!
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:57:00 AM

    more, more form you, bindu.. huggs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! You are such a darling, Nette:) I have no real clue as to when I can write my next one:( Not sure if it is lack of discipline, I need to get into one of those feverish moments and then I get it all out...I am in awe of you guys who can churn up poems everyday, and such fantastic, marvellous ones at that...Hugs!!!
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 5:33:00 PM

    A wonderful poem of Christmas fantasy! I love the richly detailed imagery! An absolutely amazing piece of poetry, Bindu!...Thank you so much for the great comments on my latest poem!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Kelly! And, I totally love your work!
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Angels' songs sung by a pure heart thinking of Christmas past and dreaming of Christmas to come! Marvelous images harmonious language, dear Bindu!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a lovely comment, thank you!!!
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:55:00 AM

    This is special... a beautiful warm write my friend! I really enjoyed it! Sending you warm hugs Bindu XOX

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Jack:)
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 4:15:00 AM

    Magical and spell-binding...YOU are a snow queen, a spring queen, fall and summer queen...

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Tim! You made my day:)
  1. Date: 12/4/2013 1:05:00 PM

    Magical write indeed. I agree with Thomas and Monterey. This is magnificently penned. Hugs and love, Gail

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Gail!! Hugs and love!
  1. Date: 12/4/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Good morning Bindu.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:03:00 AM

    Your poetry has many layers. Magical, surreal, hints of sadness. You part the veil to give the reader a glimpse of incredible beauty.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Monterey:)
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 9:12:00 AM

    This is how Christmas should be =) what a magical write =)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear, Tom!!!
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 12:54:00 AM

    Lovely poem. Nice imagery, messages and expressions used. Hello Bindu! Nice to see you again! G.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Giorgio...
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:23:00 PM

    Andrea said it all... "magical and fantastical" A wonderful write Bindu!

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:55:00 AM

    A shedding heart running parallels to a winter's snow. This was deeply thought-provoking in its poignant lines. Fantastic job!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Drake!
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Good morning Bindu. Back to read again. I just love all the imagery and how magical this feels. Still within it you have a hint of sadness. A very effective piece.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Richard. Its always such a pleasure to have you stop by.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:06:00 AM

    hey this is quite magical and fantastical. Looks like a good one for that one contest on Christmas!! Cute!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/6/2013 10:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Andrea!
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:53:00 AM

    You have some really good lines her Bindu, some that I'd love to pluck and create a poem around, can I have your line, "The tree God smiles, radiant from giving" if this is for the Xmas contest, it will surely top the list, good luck , love xxx

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 12/3/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sure, Vienna, why not:) you write some real splendid stuff, I'd love to read what you would make out of that line...Hugs!
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 7:52:00 AM

    as always beautifully penned

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