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Haiku 102

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	Haiku 102
	
	
	pine needles whisper as they fall...  she whispered
	
	
	
	
	


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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:31:00 AM
    interesting.... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:11:00 PM
    the end caught me by surprise..I love this. Bg

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Lovely Jack...took me to Colorado mountains in my memories

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:19:00 PM
    this is so interesting to have "her" whispering this phrase! Clever one.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/30/2013 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks...
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 5:14:00 PM
    - ... Yes ..... so quiet .... that is beautiful, Jack! - Have a great weekend, dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/30/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Anne-Lise, and a fine weekend to you as well... Jack