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I am the wind

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I am the wind

I am the wind You cannot see me but you can feel me breezing gently through your hair brushing lightly across your cheek whistling softly 'neath your ear I am the wind ,whirling,howling,roaring blowing fiercely 'gainst the desert sand which sifts in the hourglass of your soul I will not fail you,nor leave your side till you smell fresh rain again and soak under cascading waterfalls I am the wind,extinguishing wild fire which burns and scars the lifeline of your palm I am the sweetened fragrance of each meadow where you lay, beneath a half sun I am the wind breathing my warmth where your numb fingertips gather forget-me-not petals that fall ever so slow with every whisper of my flutish tapping sound I am the wind,I will carry you to places, far I'd tickle your lips with fluttering feathers of silent doves soaring above your past I'd strip your thought bare till I touch your heart I am the wind wafting by your pillowcase I play within your dreams with each seductive move Capturing each hour of a star I linger in the deepest of the dark Your night becomes my night and our moons would never part I am the wind.

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  1. Date: 3/24/2014 9:06:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading this again.

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 4:07:00 PM

    Read it again Charmaine Making it a favorite!

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 4:57:00 AM

    Nature's forever with us Charmaine in it's helpful or destructive ways but it means a little more when put into words as beautifully contrived as this....loved it...

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 9:05:00 AM

    Maybe the best 'wind' poem I ever read! Killer good, (wonderful)

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:31:00 PM

    Brilliant creation...Yes, woman is the wind in our life...First as a mother , second as a sister , third as a life partner , fourth as a daughter...Best wishes dear sister...Keep it up with universal love...Thank you very much for our better tomorrow....

  1. Date: 2/27/2014 3:48:00 AM

    Eloquently said...the wind is a magical element, indeed.

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 11:41:00 PM

    I really admire even the beautiful title chosedn by you "I am the wind"

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:12:00 PM

    Beautiful. Breathes a sense of peace.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:37:00 AM


  1. Date: 12/26/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Incredible personification! That opening caught my attention right away and worked on my imagination in picturesque ways.

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 2:06:00 PM

    good fa reaking grief woman!! Not to sound like Jack but ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?? I can't be catching heat flashes at work!! LOL....tell you what though, my husband's gonna thank you for this one later!! ;)

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 9:50:00 AM

    So nice to see this in the top 100. Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:09:00 AM

    I read it again and loved it (again!) Thank you for it! :) G.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:10:00 PM

    amazed and stunning writing !

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 3:42:00 PM

    Hi Charmaine, Just stopping by to say hello friend girl..Of course i enjoyed your lovely write as well.. Ken

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Hi Charmaine I commented on your comment you left on Becca's blog.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 5:31:00 AM

    WoW!! What a lovely write this is Charma and I love your avatar.. too cute :) thank you for the smiles you always bring forth with your writes :) hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:07:00 AM

    cute Xmas hat on your girl.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:06:00 AM

    charma, thanks for your news. I am looking forward to your mail. You got mine already then??

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 4:39:00 PM

    Thanks so much for calling into Drakes show. Your beautiful accent suits you perfectly. You are a very warm and thoughtful woman.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 10:07:00 PM

    Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Keep them coming beloved poet. After such a long time of putting down my pen its quite a delight to visit Poetry Soup and peruse your captivating stuff.

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 2:05:00 PM


  1. Date: 12/6/2013 9:04:00 AM

    A wonderfully written poem Charmaine, I enjoyed reading this one. I also have a poem of the same title. What are the odds.....Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 7:43:00 PM

    Your photo is adorable, too cute for words!

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Charmaine, your poem CHIMES with perfection!!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:44:00 PM

    And you are breath-taking and beautiful !!! :)

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 3:47:00 AM

    This is a typical emotion from a Maltese heart. Wonderfully phrased, intense yet so humble; Clean yet so sensual. Words which speaks out

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Pss., Beauty Is Beauty, So Wherever You Are, Sweet Beautiful Priceless Precious Charmaine *:*(* We Send Our Love, To Your Pure White, Dove ~ My Love, Always, John ...

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 4:44:00 PM

    This is one hell of a beautiful poem. enjoyed every word of it....peter