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the break of day

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the break of day

daybreak grounds me
the horizon blushes
an end to night's passion
as the dawn unfolds my dreams

it seems
you own my mind
all my thoughts tumble
like autumn leaves
in winded breaths
whispered through darkness

i dance gracefully 
in memories of you
blushed with a desire
i cannot explain
and linger
in the afterthoughts
as day breaks

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  1. Date: 5/17/2014 7:55:00 PM
    Deep psychology expressed in the warmest and prettiest of ways. I like your word choices Sandra, beautifully clear. This is very rich honesty. J.A.B.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 5/17/2014 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me FAV. this, because I experience this true now in my life.
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Sandy, the magic quicksand of simple yet not simplistic thoughts.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/1/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig....hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 1:10:00 AM
    by the way, I saw a beautiful sunset in Oregon!! I just love both ends of the spectrum, from sunrise to sunset.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/1/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    me too, sunrises and sunsets are so beautiful :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 1:09:00 AM
    this is typically GORGEOUS. Hey, Sandy, your avatar really stands out! It's very cool. I have messages for you in your email!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/1/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    got your messages, thanks...hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:48:00 PM
    A thought provoking poem sandra soooo inspiring.kudos! I will be adding a year on dec 1st. Love alwaz, Based On Belief

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 12/1/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :) today is your birthday?
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 8:51:00 PM
    This is a true beauty. Dawn poems are by far my favorites and I have added this one to mine to re-read. Thanks for all your recent visits to my page. I am swamped these past few weeks and December is so busy with sending cards and all the holiday business. take care.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow Thanks Suz...I am blessed to see the dawn most mornings and it inspires some decent poems at times you take care as well... hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Hi Sandra, A loving melodic write from you.. Ken

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Ken :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:30:00 AM
    amazing beautifully penned pictured piece

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Liam :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Stunning piece, I am impressed.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Richard.... hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:31:00 AM
    Oh my... The entire 2nd stanza is stunning! My what a talented lady you are, so thankful to have the honor of being touched by your gift. More, more, more my friend :-)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 6:49:00 PM
    This is so elegant and totally disarmed me. So many favorite phrases, but how about "I dance gracefully in memories of you." Altogether marvelous and memorable.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 9:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Mark :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 5:56:00 PM
    lovely Sandra very dreamy Shadow x smile hug

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/29/2013 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow,,,,hugs
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 3:59:00 PM
    Sweet, beautiful words Sandra. nice one....peter

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/28/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Peter!
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 12:41:00 PM
    Great Poem, Sandra!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/28/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Chuck :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 9:50:00 AM
    There is a melancholy flair in the air of this breathless beauty.......rather sad, but beautiful.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/28/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie...hope you are enjoying this wonderful day :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 8:55:00 AM
    I enjoyed the break of the day. Sandra. I wrote a poem under the same title long back but quite different one.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/28/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Dr Ram...I will have to come and find yours :)