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  1. Date: 1/9/2014 6:25:00 AM
    Dr. Mehta, I have been reading, through your amazing body of work, when I came to this piece. It really touched me. Probably because I have been there, done that as a firefighter. After something like that it is A Still Day that I still regret. Steve

    Mehta Avatar Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 1/9/2014 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the visit, Steven
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  1. Date: 12/5/2013 12:28:00 AM
    Tthis one is very sad. It should rate high. Thank you for calling my attention to my error. Joyce

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Powerful piece. Creative how you ended the expectations on a day filled with them for a new year. It intensified the sadness of the poem.

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 3:12:00 AM
    Hello Dr. Mehta. I thought this poem was very creative. Though sad, it does happen- I like how you worded it. Diane

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 1:04:00 AM
    the last two lines really give it that intensity of sadness, Dr. Ram. Nice seeing this one after my little trip for thanksgiving!

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:23:00 AM
    heartfelt in its content beautifully penned

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 10:12:00 PM
    This is a vey sad poem as well

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 2:21:00 PM
    heartfelt parent's first daughter was a still-born... they never talked about it much to us other children...but we visited her grave often....poignant piece, nicely penned though...

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Oh wow........this is a heart-breaker that takes one's breath away. Well done, Dr. Ram. (I hope this isn't your own story) :(