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Ordinary-This is Me

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Below is the poem entitled Ordinary-This is Me which was written by poet Viraj Shah. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Ordinary-This is Me

I give you light.
It's not a sacrifice,'cause I'm meant to.
You care for me not,unless,there is darkness.
Then you love me for what I do.

In light you store me away.
My wick hardens from the cold
As the waste of tears solidifies
I think of not loving you, not caring for you.

Whilst I'm on my own I prepare myself for you.
Yet,when darkness ignites
And you heat me with affection,
My insecurities melt themselves away.

I douse the fire within me to burn for you.
I'm yours whenever you want me.
Till then let me build my house of cards of hatred
Readying myself for your breath to come and demolish me.

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  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:31:00 PM
    A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief

    Shah Avatar Viraj Shah
    Date: 11/30/2013 12:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Bob !
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Why am i loving each poem you throw here?

    Shah Avatar Viraj Shah
    Date: 11/28/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks man.... Keep an eye out for more...will be posting soon !
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Welcome to the Soup I hope to read more of your verses soon. Light & Love

    Shah Avatar Viraj Shah
    Date: 11/28/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks.....Will post more soon !
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 8:55:00 AM
    so deep and well expressed.

    Shah Avatar Viraj Shah
    Date: 11/28/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Viraj, wow... This is deep, and spews out like the darkness from someones heart... love it... SKAT

    Shah Avatar Viraj Shah
    Date: 11/26/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Skat- Means a lot...Delighted that you like the poem :)