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Rewriting

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Rewriting

Croaking of many bullfrogs
At the break of day
In a frozen barren wasteland
Would surprise one I'll say

North winds are howling all around
I shiver from the cold
Roaring breezes are eerie now
But hearth's fire flames enfolds

Thank you, Lord, for daily warmth
And shelter from the cold

Unfinished...


I was watching Reflections on Daystar
One day and they showed pictures
of Alaska(I guess) in the dead of 
winter and I could hear Bullfrogs croaking..

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  1. Date: 11/28/2013 5:23:00 PM
    I feel for you guys having to endure such extreme temperatures. I've never seen snow in my life and I never want to. Herewith a warm hug to chase the cold, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 9:25:00 PM
    such a lovely write, hope you enjoyed your thanksgiving, always, ...p.d.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:40:00 PM
    very beautifully drawn piece

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:04:00 PM
    I can relate to the feeling of being thankful for warmth and shelter. We get some brutal winters here in Wisconsin, and I would not want to be without either! I am looking forward to reading this again, once it is finished. Great work so far, Sara!...Thank you for the nice visit, as always!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:27:00 PM
    This is a fascinating write my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening and dynamic poem here this evening! What a lovely piece Sara, you have delighted me with your great words! Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Hi Sara, Wonderful winter wonder land write! Ken

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Wonderful poem. I co....peteruld feel the cold on this hot day in Australia. I love the sound of frogs