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My Fondest Brief Unforgettable Moment

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My Fondest Brief Unforgettable Moment

First his long and tender gaze. Then came his loving caresses followed by little kisses, delicate dewdrops of sensuous sweetness that he planted gently along my forehead, my cheeks, the back of my neck, and around my ear lobes. Happiness consumed me! Butterfly kisses he showed me with the long lashes of his beautiful dark eyes fluttering like tiny wings against my own. I giggled next as he rubbed his nose to mine; The Eskimo way, he said. As he stroked my back, his fingers lingered at my waist. Unlike others before him, he did not grab for my body with the clumsiness of a boy. He let his smooth kisses linger too so when at last I felt his tongue inside my mouth, it was the sweetest of invasions. . . . . Neither did he press for more than I was prepared to give, for I was a woman-child, still clinging to chasteness, and though I’d known him but a short time, this magical moment was to be our one night together before he returned to a country where I would never go. Our brief time would become the fondest of my memories - one to be rekindled time and time again through poetry. Written 11/23/13 by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's contest: the BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT Poetry Contest (this is honestly a new poem but I've written of this moment so many times, it looks like all those other poems!!)

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  1. Date: 5/18/2014 6:00:00 PM
    Hi Andrea, well, this Is an unforgetable write. To have yourself this moment which Is etched among your silver cords of memory is wonderful. This Is a wonderful write on Love. You take us Into these gentle and Love-filled moments with soft words. You take us through every little moment, we are there within this vision. We live the vision In our own minds, the words touch the heart with such warmth. May your pen run gold always. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 12:46:00 PM
    I know these moments.Why do people call a Flower as Petal?

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 10:05:00 PM
    Goodness me . Some guys have all the luck , lol Sensational as always . Daz

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Beautiful write Andrea.Making a woman feel special and appreciated was always something that came natural. and the memories lingered. I'm sure. Pete..

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:35:00 PM
    I wonder if this guy ever thought he'd leave such a lasting impression Petal, he's cropped up a few times but always in a refreshed memory. Awww, there's always going to be one you never forget. Congratulations are in order I see. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 12:39:00 AM
    Wow- thanks for sharing. This was finely written - surely a most unforgettable moment. Outstanding work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:39:00 PM
    I'm happy that you won with this poem. I enjoyed reading it a second time. Congratulations... Jack

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Hi, my dear friend Andrea. This is an outstanding poem indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you so much for sharing! My biggest hearty congratulations in your well-deserved super win not only on this masterpiece but also the rest of your recent winning pieces. Cheers and biggest hugs! Goodnight now. It's Mon. again tomorrow. Tcare! love lots always & 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:49:00 AM
    love in one moment in time never to leave you ever, andie.. congrats on your shining win in my contest.. huggs.. how are you?

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:03:00 AM
    First I want to say congratulations on your win Andrea, I love how you write. Your description of this moment in life was perfection. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.....Roger

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:23:00 PM
    Ahh..awesome..congratulations Andrea....so glad you placed high with this...it's great...

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 7:23:00 PM
    LOL that's fine! It is distilled like fine wine! I love this incarnation. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:58:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Andrea

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 12:08:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:57:00 AM
    *delicate dewdrops of sensuous sweetness* what a line you have coined here!!Love this poem Andrea.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 4:20:00 PM
    That's the stuff dreams are made of, but not necessariy life. A moment of bliss from a gentle kiss and now you are someone else's wife. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:46:00 PM
    a very lovely rendition of love Andrea superb write Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:58:00 PM
    You just love to keep talking about it, eh? I am so jealous - never had a single moment like this. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 12:57:00 PM
    Thank you, Andrea. Dulcinea was really a peasnt woman that Don Quixote imagined to be the most beautiful woman on earth. Everytime my hispanic wife and I would have a spat, She would always tell me to go find my Dulcinea. This poem is a devotion to her .

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Lucky is the one who has the chance to live moments of pure love and gentle erotic encounters for they ever linger in the heart and mind as a beackon that elumines the way of future relationsips. A fantastic poem that captivates the reader with its beauty and innocence! a 7!

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