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My Fondest Brief Unforgettable Moment

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My Fondest Brief Unforgettable Moment

First his long and tender gaze. Then came his loving caresses followed by little kisses, delicate dewdrops of sensuous sweetness that he planted gently along my forehead, my cheeks, the back of my neck, and around my ear lobes. Happiness consumed me! Butterfly kisses he showed me with the long lashes of his beautiful dark eyes fluttering like tiny wings against my own. I giggled next as he rubbed his nose to mine; The Eskimo way, he said. As he stroked my back, his fingers lingered at my waist. Unlike others before him, he did not grab for my body with the clumsiness of a boy. He let his smooth kisses linger too so when at last I felt his tongue inside my mouth, it was the sweetest of invasions. . . . . Neither did he press for more than I was prepared to give, for I was a woman-child, still clinging to chasteness, and though I’d known him but a short time, this magical moment was to be our one night together before he returned to a country where I would never go. Our brief time would become the fondest of my memories - one to be rekindled time and time again through poetry. Written 11/23/13 by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's contest: the BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT Poetry Contest (this is honestly a new poem but I've written of this moment so many times, it looks like all those other poems!!)

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 12:46:00 PM

    I know these moments.Why do people call a Flower as Petal?

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 10:05:00 PM

    Goodness me . Some guys have all the luck , lol Sensational as always . Daz

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Beautiful write Andrea.Making a woman feel special and appreciated was always something that came natural. and the memories lingered. I'm sure. Pete..

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:35:00 PM

    I wonder if this guy ever thought he'd leave such a lasting impression Petal, he's cropped up a few times but always in a refreshed memory. Awww, there's always going to be one you never forget. Congratulations are in order I see. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 12:39:00 AM

    Wow- thanks for sharing. This was finely written - surely a most unforgettable moment. Outstanding work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:39:00 PM

    I'm happy that you won with this poem. I enjoyed reading it a second time. Congratulations... Jack

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Hi, my dear friend Andrea. This is an outstanding poem indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you so much for sharing! My biggest hearty congratulations in your well-deserved super win not only on this masterpiece but also the rest of your recent winning pieces. Cheers and biggest hugs! Goodnight now. It's Mon. again tomorrow. Tcare! love lots always & 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:49:00 AM

    love in one moment in time never to leave you ever, andie.. congrats on your shining win in my contest.. huggs.. how are you?

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:03:00 AM

    First I want to say congratulations on your win Andrea, I love how you write. Your description of this moment in life was perfection. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.....Roger

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:23:00 PM

    Ahh..awesome..congratulations Andrea....so glad you placed high with this...it's great...

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 7:23:00 PM

    LOL that's fine! It is distilled like fine wine! I love this incarnation. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:58:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Andrea

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 12:08:00 PM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:57:00 AM

    *delicate dewdrops of sensuous sweetness* what a line you have coined here!!Love this poem Andrea.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 4:20:00 PM

    That's the stuff dreams are made of, but not necessariy life. A moment of bliss from a gentle kiss and now you are someone else's wife. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:46:00 PM

    a very lovely rendition of love Andrea superb write Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Andrea, this is absolutely beautiful and very touching. Words of wisdom for sure. Wishing you and your hubby and very warm and blessed Thanksgiving. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:58:00 PM

    You just love to keep talking about it, eh? I am so jealous - never had a single moment like this. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Thank you, Andrea. Dulcinea was really a peasnt woman that Don Quixote imagined to be the most beautiful woman on earth. Everytime my hispanic wife and I would have a spat, She would always tell me to go find my Dulcinea. This poem is a devotion to her .

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Lucky is the one who has the chance to live moments of pure love and gentle erotic encounters for they ever linger in the heart and mind as a beackon that elumines the way of future relationsips. A fantastic poem that captivates the reader with its beauty and innocence! a 7!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:38:00 AM

    Beautiful and passionate. Our memories are new each time we think of them. This is sure to be a winner.

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 8:54:00 PM

    This sounds like first love the one we never forget!!!!I was breathless...awesome...:-) :-) :-) :-)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 11/26/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Got your note Andrea...I can see why this was the best love! No rush...pushing...only..asking...inviting...so perfectly described here...with your beautiful words
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:17:00 PM

    I love this poem. sweet, emotional and sensual in that order bur alas your loves are always fleeting. A Shakespeare tragedy as your other poem Emmanuel.

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 3:20:00 PM

    Lovely poem you have written here Andrea. I sure hope it is a winner....peter

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 3:02:00 PM

    sweet memories indeed, my friend - I bet he still remembers you too - congrats on your wins, of course : )

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 1:20:00 PM

    Wow, these moments though fleeting are forever captured in memory even though the reality vanished--I've often wished to have a day like this to revisit--but would we spoil it somehow--thankfully this will never be spoiled for you!

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:40:00 AM

    You have yet again impressed me with your skills my friend! I remember you writing of this moment in other poems that you have written, this one expertly described this situation very nicely, I enjoyed it Andrea! I really loved reading this awesome poem this morning, what a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 4:36:00 AM

    Nice caresses, rubbing his nose, kisses here and there leading to invasions, nice lyrical impressions, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 10:33:00 PM

    Wow, What a beautiful memory to have. And you brought it alive through poetry so well. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 7:23:00 PM

    You still got it Andrea, still mesmerizing as ever with your romantic words, well done my friend, xxx

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