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Sometimes

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Below is the poem entitled Sometimes which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sometimes

Sometimes life can be as if
you are living in a dream
everything going smoothly
life is just so very good

Your days are filled with joy
happiness seems a given
your family and friends
are all gathered round

Yet here come the clouds
every day reality intrudes
small and large disasters
begin striking taking toll

Back down to earth we come
learning to take good and bad
moulding them best as can be
not perfect as  life seldom is

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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 3:05:00 AM
    UpS aNd dOwnS ARE A PART OF LIFE, lets face it dear. Nicely written.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:56:00 PM
    Life is as you say! Good write Shadow!

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Yes life does have it's challanges sometimes. The bads make the goods that much more brilliant. How we react to the clouds will determine our overall contentment in life.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    very true Rick ty for your advice too Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 11/24/2013 9:07:00 PM
    oh yes, this one speaks volumes Shadow... sometimes life isn't as perfect as it seems...good write...I enjoyed this one and needed the read tonight :) hugs-

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Sandra then I am glad I wrote it if it helped you ty Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 11/24/2013 8:16:00 PM
    Thank you for the congrads, I wrote it for my son jared.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Cherl he must be proud of you then Shadow x smile hug