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  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:01:00 PM

    Hello Gail...love this poem too...I also love yellow...it..does have soothing traits

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:18:00 PM

    another beauty from you, Gail. I can imagine this flower. And there is no better color for a ray to be than yellow, that of the warming sun.

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 10:20:00 AM

    This beauty radiates yellow peace! Gail! Well done! Jimbo

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 5:39:00 AM

    Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:15:00 AM

    Yellow also happens to be a fave color of mine but I would never manage to describe it as eloquently. Good job, my friend. My very best to you in the contest. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:52:00 AM

    Gail,thanks for affording us the opportunity to read a delightful poem.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 12:56:00 PM

    Infinite Beauty! Gail....you shine!

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:03:00 PM

    - Beautiful as the sunshine .... a poem that warms my winter heart ..... - Wish you luck in the contest, my dear friend Gail!! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 7:34:00 AM

    The beauty of a flower never dies but lingers on in our heart and mind! Wonderful images beautifully expressed, my dear Gail! Good luck!

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry this morning..I like the color yellow because it reminds me of sun and warmth..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 4:41:00 AM

    Hello there dear poet ! This write of yours has me counting the days 'till Spring ! *smiles* I do love Jehovah God's gift of those beautiful flowers, as they bud and prepare to burst with radiance ! I so miss being here with everyone on the Soup. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving my friend ! Gently now with the belly Gail ! *smiles* Have a great day.....Much love, james

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:53:00 PM

    Hi Gail, Nice work with rich imagery.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:38:00 PM

    It sounds like heaven's sunlit colors, and also the colors of your soul, Merry Christmas love, soon it will be here xxx

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 3:54:00 PM

    a sure winner here, my friend - beautiful

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 8:54:00 AM

    relishing the trill of flowers blooming throuh all cycles.. my, gail.. freeverse becomes you... such a luscious work; beautiful!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:24:00 AM

    I can hear the glory of the last flower petal falling to the ground, radiating a special yellow aura all about it, such beauty can be heard everywhere! I really loved this incredible poem my friend! This is a tremendous write! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 12:24:00 AM

    Wonderful poem Anne-Lise. thanks for sharing....peter

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 10:43:00 PM

    Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 5:31:00 PM

    nice one Gail it reads like the life of a flower great read

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 4:46:00 PM

    It sounds like a very happy color Gail, nice one for the contest, xxx