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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:36:00 PM
    What a beautifully concluded story, which has moved us while listening the heart touching pleas of the little boy. Touching write Rose. I am reminded of a Poem written by some American Poet long back 'The Teacher'. Few lines of that Poem still hangs on my mind, when someone asked the teacher "Are you not tired of teaching Latin throughout the year" The teacher replied "I don't teach Latin I teach boys". Beautiful write my friend and thanks for your kind comments on my Poem. Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Love it! Sometimes the smallest effort brings the greatest rewards.

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 4:50:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful conclusion to your wonderful story my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a glorious poem Rose, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 12:42:00 PM
    victory is for brave souls like you whose spirit prevails over trials, vie... lovely ending; so touched!..:) huggs