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Death Came Like A Storm

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Death Came Like A Storm



        As an everlasting journey
        among philosophers
        we lived in our love dream world

        You had everything
        Insight and understanding
        For something big
        greater than humanity

        I needed you so badly
        Wind calm days
        Avoid the storm
        came to me

        The truth is somewhere
        The moment you died in my arms
        No one knows why
        But I know that death took you

        Like in stormy moments
        My scream was strangled
        Give me a quiet minute
        a minute that is not stormy

        My tears are wiped away
        The storm is calm
        ... I have learned
        Life is so fragile

        I see the future of hope
        Life without you
        Living in the hope that
        even were present with me

        I will never forget you
        Sometime in the future
        .... meet you again
        You are standing there at the gate

        Old wounds will heal with time
        Hope and life recurs
        With a kiss I say goodbye





Sponsor:Nette Onclaud
Contest Name:BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT
Deadline	12/18/2013 12:00:00 AM



22.11.2013
A-L Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 12/27/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, Anne-Lise! ~Jean

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/28/2013 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the enjoyable visit Jean - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:00:00 AM
    An amazing write... Absolutely captivating. Congratulations on the win!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Carol. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Congratulations, Anne-Lise. A much-deserved win... Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Jack. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:17:00 PM
    You passionately captured the deep emotion of loss. Congrats, Anne Lise!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2013 4:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Juliet. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:28:00 AM
    It's my great joy to read once again this excellent heartfelt write of yours my dearest friend Anne Lise. I'm deeply moved again by this story. Biggest hugs to you and so so glad to see it on top of the list. My biggest hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Biggest hugs! By d way, TYSM for your lovely comment on my terse poem. So late but Belated happy thanksgiving day to u & ur love ones. Hope u've great celebration. More hugs w/ kisses! love lots always, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Leonora. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 1:56:00 PM
    So tenderly spoken in your captivating way.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and nice comment on my poem, Mark. - I like feedback :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:42:00 AM
    oh my, i was takne by this poignant piece.. congrats, anne, in my contest with huggs..:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Nette. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Such a beautiful poem Anna Lise, You touched my heart and I felt everything you wrote. Congratulations on your win.....Roger

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Roger. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 12:18:00 AM
    Hi Anne Lise: A wonderful and heart rending poem. Congratulations on your win. SuZ

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, SuZ. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:17:00 PM
    Oh Anne Lise..so happy to see you winning with this sad and wonderful poem..congratulations

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Donna. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Debbie. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:54:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/29/2013 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit, Joseph. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 12:05:00 PM
    I loved it. Excellent poem and great win. Bravo Anne Lise! G.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/29/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the greeting - and enjoyable visit Giorgio :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 10:04:00 AM
    So sad and so touching. A beautiful poem. love phyl.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/28/2013 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Sad, but written so beautifully.. I love this poem!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/27/2013 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Bindu. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 2:52:00 AM
    Hi Anne Lise good morning to you, this is so touching loved it, have a great day, all the best Poetowen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/27/2013 2:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Owen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:45:00 PM
    This is well written , and really a professional write , I could see these latest poems I have reading , in grief cards . If it has not won , it feels like a winner . Love, SR

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/27/2013 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Shanity. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:34:00 AM
    Very very sad poem, nicely scripted. thank you for your visit on my poetry world..means a million Anne. and you still my favourite Poet.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/26/2013 3:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Raymond. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 8:01:00 AM
    SORROFUL VERSE; ADIEU TO A LOVED ONE WITH A KISS. THANKS FOR SHARING. FRIEND,JM

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/25/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Tenderly gripping, I enjoyed this ,more than my own entry. And through the pain, life moves on. So close to perfection!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/25/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Jajosh. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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