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Jack and Jill

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Jack and Jill


Once there was a handsome guy called Jack,
wedded a beauty named Jill, dressed in sack.
they went up the hill
to have a night of hell.
Bloody this Jack and Jill song rhymes fake!

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  1. Date: 1/28/2014 2:41:00 AM
    Sweet limerick..Gave me giggles: )...Charma

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 8:14:00 AM
    CREATIVE UNDERTAKER. YOU MADE MY DAY. THANKS FOR SHARING. JM

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Hello New Santa C.... The name is witty... Love the Undertaker Poet... Has lots of meaning when thinking of poetry.. LOL... enjoyed the limerick.... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:58:00 AM
    very interesting. I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:12:00 AM
    gigggles!.. you have a funny bone, santa.. got more?.. love this but jill came tumbling down, aha!..:) hggs

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:50:00 AM
    :)))) fun limerick dear Santa ! - // Anne-Lise :)

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 11/22/2013 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne Lisa. (: ) New Santa.
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:39:00 AM
    Funny and humorous write,

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 11/22/2013 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dr.Ram Mehta.(: ) New Santa.
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 11:11:00 PM
    haha, now WHO might you really be??

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 11/21/2013 11:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea i am no Panda but New Santa.(: ) New Santa.
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Hello Santa, It's a good try, xxx

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 11/21/2013 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mystic Rose. (: ) New Santa.