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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:47:00 AM
    I see what you mean now about being on the same wave length, Jon. I must have missed this little beauty. Well written,my friend....peter

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/23/2013 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:31:00 PM
    - Rotten bodies with lifeless eyes ..... creepy - Well done,Jon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/23/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Jon, ha-ha sees this every day at my home... Good one ~:) Hugs* SKAT

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/23/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Zombies! Glued to the TV? their cell phone? or their video games?
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:28:00 PM
    i love the rhyme of "faith" and "wraith," jon - you are so clever!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/21/2013 10:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear ilene. I almost didn't post this poem.
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 5:47:00 PM
    AHA, NOW I see it, JOn. ONe line in particular should have told me the first time!!! GREAT poem.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/21/2013 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    But it's veiled so it's ok. Thank you again for all your encouragement and support.
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Wonderfully written, Jon! Your images gave me chills down my spine - well done! :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/21/2013 10:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear one.
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:06:00 PM
    I Thank Andrea Dietrich for not only inspiring this poem but also for her constant support and encouragement. Without which I would never have posted it on the soup. Thank you again Andrea for everything.