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Too Much Love

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Too Much Love



Got too much love, it's bursting out Never have felt so much passion Every woman that I pass on the street I ask if they're looking for action Got bruises all over my face and body Coz some don't find it amusing Thought all the girlies found me stunning Answer's no, you can tell by the bruising The wounds will heal in time, I know But the damage it's done to my psyche Can't be measured, it's crushed my ego A severe disappointment, by crikey Well, I've still got a bunch of P-Soup friends My avatar is some Hollywood dude It gives me a fighting chance with the ladies I'd never post one of me in the nude That surely would chase them away for sure Got bumps in all the wrong places But a heart that's really as big a a pumpkin Sadly I still must wear my braces © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 6:12:00 AM

    You have just enough love in deed! You never fail to deliver the laughter of the god's! Hugs forever xoxox

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/22/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    One of my MANY silly moments! LOL One of probably many more... love you sweet thing!!!! Have a souper fantastic day dearest friend! Multiple warm cozy hugs xoxox
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 11:48:00 AM

    YES!!!! Lovely avatar indeed! ;) You are a barrel of laughs, bruises and all!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/21/2013 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I've recovered and most of the bruises have disappeared, thank you Miss Boop! Hope all is well with you dear friend!!! Hugs and lotsa love, Kenny xoxox
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 10:23:00 AM

    LOL 7+ Jack! You can never have too much love - surely, those women don't know what they're missing! Hugz xox

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/21/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Little bit of frivolity here, my dear Miss Wattle... thanks for 7+ But you're right... we can NEVER have too much love!!! Warm cuddly hugs, my dear xoxoxoxox
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:37:00 AM

    Mon ami extraorinaire, you are the envy of MENKIND we owe you so much and we die like you to become! Hilarious beyond conception your poem, a marvel of humorous expressions, the epitome of a brilliant wit! Thank you! I have enjoyed it to the superlative degree! Why have you disappeared my friend? Is anything the matter? I haven't seen you for ages!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/21/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    An extraordinary review from you my dear Demetrios! Your silly Canadian friend thanks you!!! As far as having "disappeared", I've still been posting my regular two or three a day! Hope to see you! Cheers, Jack
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:33:00 AM

    Dragon says you might need wise old Grandpa Troll to keep you out of trouble... And hope Cathie doesn't catch you... Bad Boy! Bad Boy! We'll send Grandpa Troll immediately... Dragon agrees... And THAT'S RARE...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/21/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm going into hiding... haha he won't find me so tell him not to waste his fuel! Kooky Carol... love ya! xoxoxox