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Seduced

Today I find yesterday's essence still tarries within my mind I try and wrap myself in thoughts of you to regain warmth from November's wind the trees are less blushed than I as they stand naked from this weathered touch I feel you in a winded breath like a tongued whisper against bare flesh the lake mirrors my reflection as I smile back through its ripples as if fingered by the soft caress of your hands I can see the sun paint passion's red across the sky I get lost in the depths of you within me and climax between the folds of this day
11/19/2013

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:55:00 AM

    wow.. Sandra..love it.. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:15:00 PM

    sandy, aren't you glad now that you entered this one. A MOST well deserved win, my friend. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Beautiful! Just enough directness to be, well, enough. Congratulations on your win... Jack

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:56:00 AM

    Wow! This is a very beautiful & passionate poem my dear friend Sandra. Thank u so much for sharing & my big hearty congratulations on your awesome win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:22:00 PM

    very seductive poem congrats Sandra fine pen Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Wow...congratulations on this awesome win

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:58:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Sandra

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:38:00 PM

    A flawless and scattered trail of images like a fingers tracery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:21:00 PM

    flawlessly written and subtly sensual, building beautifully to those last three lines - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 4:39:00 PM

    Beautiful poem! Congrats on your win, Sandra. G.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Hi Sandra, Some lovely poesia romantica here Sandra.. Ken

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/23/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ken...sometimes my muse finds the romantic side...
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 10:06:00 AM

    softly seductive leaving me wanting to seek the peak of my senses..a most dazzling,luscious melody,sandra...huggdj

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/23/2013 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Nette :)
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 11:41:00 PM

    I love the dreamy yet sensual flow of this one. Enough to tantalise. =)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/23/2013 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Thomas :)
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 10:21:00 AM

    Are you entering this one in the erotica contest? You should it is subtle and still explicit in a delicious way.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/22/2013 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good for you, I think it will do very well.
    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/21/2013 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard, and notice I made sure all the "i's" were caps...lol... and yeah i did enter it :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:48:00 PM

    - A beauty of great heights. . . real "class" Sandra !! (7) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne-Lise...sometimes my muse finds the beauty... hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 1:53:00 PM

    subtle sensuality dripping in soft flames of desire, sandra... lovely work, yesss!..:) huggs

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Nette :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:47:00 PM

    yes, yES, YES!! Perfect to the title from foreplay to fruition! Mail

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Craig...the title was the toughest part of this piece...almost changed it to seduction after posting it... hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 10:12:00 AM

    beautiful poem Sandra...

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Joseph :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:13:00 AM

    very beautifully crafted piece

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Liam :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:03:00 AM

    Beautiful, beautiful... amazing work, Sandra!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Bindu :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:30:00 AM

    Mesmerizing and seductive. Part of me is glad it ended when it did, but a bigger part of me wishes it had carried on a little longer.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well thank you Mark...it had to end after it climaxed... actually when my muse first started with it, it ended sooner, then I came back to it a little later in the day and reworked a few lines and it grew a little... :)
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 11:14:00 PM

    Sandra, I love the way you write, your words are very beautiful. Sometimes I envy the way that people like you write. But I guess I am stuck with my simplistic ballad style forever. I truly enjoyed this poem....Peter

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Peter...you write beautifully as well and I am one who cannot write rhyme as well...we all have our own style, that's what makes poetry so very wonderful. the variety it offers us...hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 9:06:00 PM

    wowowow, Sandy. I think you have written several I have not seen lately? This is SO GOOD. Is it for the seductive contest? What I like about your poetry is that the lines are the perfect length for free verse. I do not enjoy long lines (like I sometimes use in free verse) I admire how you can do them just the right way!!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2013 8:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea...I penned it from inspiration and wasn't sure about entering it or not...I may since it seems fitting...hugs :)