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how can i covet the day
when it doesn't belong to me?

i thirst for you,
more so than the day,
am i wrong to do so?

my sun rises,
but only through your eyes
and i see your smile
worn by the moon
on cold endless nights,
but i thirst for you
more so than the day.

am i wrong?

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  1. Date: 5/8/2014 5:27:00 PM
    Hi Sandra, Nice way of expressing, and your imagery is outstanding!! This is a beauty Sandra. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Once again you have written beautifully. I loved this poem...peter

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/21/2013 8:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Peter :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:41:00 PM
    Love the way you write, beautiful--why over complicate when you can do this--perfect

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/20/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig...i guess we all have a style that fits our writing...perhaps that's why poetry is so intersting, all the different voices and images... hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 11:43:00 AM
    These feelings are ineffable. So how did you manage to describe them so well?

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/20/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i do not know Mark...my muse just sings what she wants to sing...thank you :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:05:00 AM
    you should belong to every beautiful day, lady.. very beautifully expressed...

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/20/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you my friend :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 9:07:00 PM
    another wonderful poem. I think it is fictional though, am I wrong? haha.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/20/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hmmm i don't know...are you wrong? Thank you Andrea :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Unless you are speaking about God, then I know you are showing your love of nature.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/20/2013 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    not of God...not of nature...but yes of a love...
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 10:55:00 AM
    Of course the day belongs to you! That's the whole point of being presented with the gift of WAKING UP! You can do the math from there. ;-) Real love shouldn't never hurt like this...Excellent thoughts in this writing.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/19/2013 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Drake...awake and blessed with the beautiful rise of another day...one of the greatest things of my job is getting to watch a new sky unfold each day! hugs :)