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on the edge of day

As morningtide folded in the day
there was something about it
that lured me in its depths

the moon still visible
was satiated 
as my mind is
on thoughts of you

I could feel you
fingering every inch of me
in the rise and fall
of warm breaths
as they stumbled
through the November air

the dark clouds
traced the edges of the moon
like the shadows of life
that linger around us

the sun
though not visible
flickered white
beneath the clouds
a ray of hope
for resplendent days
like that of our yesterdays

the mist of morn
tumbled from skies
momentarily
as did tears
from lonely eyes
within the depths of blue
that now surrounded me
as day unfolded

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:13:00 PM
    Your work is on the cutting edge!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:16:00 PM
    beautiful poem binding nature with depths of emotion. I enjoy reading your poem.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/21/2013 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:03:00 PM
    A beautiful write Sandra... :o)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/20/2013 8:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Dan :)
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 6:32:00 PM
    I enjoy getting lost in the poem, carefree, as a much desired Sunday drive. Very beautiful.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/19/2013 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you...it started out from a drive in my bus...I am lucky enough to get to watch the sun rise daily!
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 9:55:00 AM
    A soft battle of hope, loneliness, & want within your heartbeats. This was eloquent & very touching.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/19/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake...some mornings while driving my bus the sunrises are unique and put me deep in my own thoughts...:)
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:13:00 PM
    Love how you write Sandy--no exception here!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/19/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you...it didn't quite come out the way it went through my head while driving along watching morning roll in...but when my muse talks and i can't write at the moment, i never quite remeber all the words or how they fell... hugs :)