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  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:02:00 AM

    Really cool piece, F.J.; I found myself reading it several times, and it just got better each time I read it. Kudos for this intriguing, well-expressed piece! :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/1/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it! A couple felt is was a bit too agressive toward women but they have to understand when reading that it was the female who initiated the force here ;) After all, some of us are not always cotton candy and white Lilies lol
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:14:00 PM

    whew, this is like an excerpt from fifty shades, and every bit as good ... the poor men on this site don't stand a chance with you around ;) Just don't give my friend Jackster a heart attack ok? lol

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/22/2013 10:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOLOL Becca! I think it's too late...Jack seems to have had a few already. Luv ya Jack! Thank you Becca :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 2:07:00 PM

    with jacky on this one...no enthusiastic words suffice....

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/20/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh! Lol ole cut-up Mr Ellison below! Sorry James, a little sleep deprived and therefore slow. Thank you.
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/20/2013 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi James....sorry but you lost me..."with jacky on this one?"
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Holy crapola!!! What are you trying to do to us old guys! Going to dunk my head under the cold water tap! Phew!!! LOL No that's not gonna do it... maybe ice cubes in my jockeys! Holy Crapola!!!!!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/19/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well serves you right for reading that long thing!! LOL Morning Jack, you should have known better when you read the title so I'm not feeling too sorry for you right now.....and yes I double checked the spelling of "title" this time! lol
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 12:10:00 PM

    Damn. On the cosmos, indeed. Some cold water please...on my face. Thanks!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/18/2013 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOLOL Drake OMGoodness you're nuts!
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:38:00 AM

    The nectar of your passion drips into a steady stream as you taste his strength. Let the Erotic Hunger Games begin - Well Done :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/18/2013 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol; I hope she knows what she's getting into with you!