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Robotic Women

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Robotic Women



Without love, life would have no meaning No incentive to get up every morn It motivates us to reach brand new heights As we greet each new day that's born When we find that extra special someone The world becomes so much brighter Annoying little things no longer bother us Our load seems a whole lot lighter Imagine if the world never heard of love Walk around in a robotic state That's surely not an attractive scenario THEY would decide who's your mate Think I'll stick with human type girlies Robotic women wouldn't ring my gong Give me some sweet, soft, tender pink skin Clanging metal wouldn't turn me on! © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:45:00 PM

    haha this is a very creative way of looking at things :) I don't think I'd like being a robot either, or being with a robot... although Russell below does have a good point.... lol

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/18/2013 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'd much prefer real live warm cuddly pink skin for me ANYTIME!!! LOL Love ya milady! xox
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:30:00 AM

    How do you know, you might like to be with a robot...they could be programmed to be sweet and cuddly and everything you want, HA HA HA! Just kidding my friend! I know exactly what you mean, gimmie the sweet and LOVING humans, just one is all I need, and she's the greatest! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a fun piece, Great work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/18/2013 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey! You're right... they could be programmed to do your bidding! WOO HOOOOO!!! LOL
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 9:22:00 PM

    Hahaha.. Last stanza had me rolling in beautiful laughter... Huggles

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/18/2013 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My day is now complete... I made my dear Sarai roll in beautiful laughter! What a sweet phrase! You is a really lovey! Warm cuddly hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:20:00 PM

    How true, dear Jack - life would have no meaning at all! Hugz xoxox

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/17/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I can hear the clanging of metal on metal now! LOL xoxoxoxox
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 10:24:00 AM

    No robotic women around here. The Techno Trolls tend to take them apart... And my toaster, and my microwave... But I stop them at the refrigerator... I have Dragon guard it... Works every time... Dragon knows where his second breakfast is buttered from... LOL...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/17/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Dragon knows where his second breakfast is buttered"... love it xoxoxox