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A Twist in Time

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It has been noted that many times we met our demise, yet totally unaware...


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A Twist in Time

As I stand here in front of my closet , starring in to the space...
I wonder which black dress to choose, and how I am going to face..
All the guests that will be there , at your final resting place...
I look in the mirror and what do I see ?
But cuts and scratches all over me...
Although I don’t feel any physical pain...
Oh, what’s that I hear ?..could it be rain ?
I miss you already...what went wrong ?..
We were driving along just listening to our favorite song...
I remember the curve on that old mountain road...
And then heard the train crash... and then explode...
Time to go called out my Mother...
It was a cold November morning, and very heavy rain...
And I swear I heard the whistle of a train...
As I looked around I could see...
So many friends and family...
Standing in the crowd was Aunt Sarah and Uncle Fred...
OMG ! I thought they were dead...
And there’s dear old Michael...
I had heard he crashed his motorcycle...
All of a sudden I saw YOU stand...
With a bright red rose, you held in your hand...
What are you doing I wanted to shout...
But then I realized what you were about...
You dropped the rose upon MY grave...
It was then I realized You were the one that was saved...

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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Wow...reminded me of one of my favorite movies...the sixth sense...awesome

    force Avatar kj force
    Date: 11/24/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Donna..thank you for the comment and compliment... glad it stirred a memory...
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 3:26:00 AM
    Your title is apt to the twist in your tale, one beautifully weaved, I should add. Nice work, my friend. Licia :-)

    force Avatar kj force
    Date: 11/23/2013 3:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    delysia...glad you enjoyed, thanks for the critique...
  1. Date: 11/16/2013 9:57:00 PM
    Very nice twist at the end. Caught me by surprise. Great job.

    force Avatar kj force
    Date: 11/16/2013 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jon thanks for the comment...I enjoy writing off the beaten path... I've always enjoyed the abstract ! have a great Sunday..
  1. Date: 11/16/2013 9:44:00 PM
    I have read that such moments of confusion actually do happen...wonderful poem. hugs, catie :)

    force Avatar kj force
    Date: 11/16/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Catie..glad you like my write..hope you will read my others...thanks for commenting..