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Lord forgive me she says she is on that sophisticated wine and dine, 
she says her lips are sweet, hips full bliss enough to put your mind at ease. 
Damn girl where did you get those degrees. 
She feigns knowledge, pledges abstinence but lets loose to the first fool she sees
Then pledges again and lets loose and the cycle continuously, continues in a loop of ignorance. 
Strange you are, a woman you are,
so when will you take a stand, and understand your lips and hips... 
momentary satisfactions. The ratings of your visage an illusion which fades over time. 
Rude... me... no, truthful yes, knowledge is a blessing the king you seek is not 
dwelling in the slums in where you hum your tunes
Lord forgive me she says she is on that sophisticated wine and dine, 
she says her lips are sweet, hips full of bliss enough to put your mind at ease. 
I won't beg, I won't cry so the more power to you girl, cause ignorance is truly bliss

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  1. Date: 11/16/2013 3:30:00 PM
    i read it all. i liked it alot. it had alot to say about girls i see around me that could do so much better. it's poetic value to me is all the way in the sevens. good job.

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    Date: 11/16/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it. Most people don't read it all and comment based on the first three lines, which is why i have to put that in so they can understand the message.