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On the hill tops
Or mountain side
Where the sun shines
In the clear blue sky
The Epoh play
Stretch their wings and fly
It’s where you want to be
On the mountain side

Not in the valleys
In the damp and cold
Where the Terger grump
As their frowns grow old
They remember lives
And sad tales are told
You don’t want to be 
In the damp and cold

So don’t follow the Terger
Don’t walk their way
Join the Epoh
And glory in the day
Dance their jig
Teach them how you play
Then join them in flight
And fly far away


I wrote this for a colleague's 9yr old daughter. She loves it, especially after her Mum revealed to her the trick.
Cheers
Scott

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  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:10:00 PM
    Hi Scott, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 3:03:00 AM
    Your right some poems are better left untitled of course only you know where you were coming from so you can always go back.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 8:09:00 AM
    I rather liked this, Scott. Nice imagery and well-expressed. Good job and kudos, my friend :)

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Scott, hi... Stopping by again just to say hi... Smiles... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:31:00 PM
    great poem I enjoyed very much Joe

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:46:00 PM
    I really adored this piece of fantasy you have written here Scott...Well done....peter

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Yttiw.Dna Revelc Yrev. lol. Licia :-)

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    Date: 11/21/2013 10:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sknaht, tnemmoc emosewa
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 5:50:00 AM
    I am glad that I chose this fun work to read today..Thanks for stopping by to read my work ...I hope that the friend's child will always be able to have some Epoh in her..Sometimes it is fun to invite my inner child out to play..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 5:50:00 PM
    Nicely written and well done thank you for sharing it I really enjoy it. cheri

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 9:17:00 AM
    - A poem that fits both young people and adults, beautiful Scott! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:03:00 AM
    Hi Scott, wonderful imagery, mom, always knows whats good for kids.. thank you for sharing this with us... Kids are surprising... hugs...Linda

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 7:32:00 AM
    So talented (: Love that you brightened another's day. You've brightened mine. Great one. Thanks for your sweet visits. Always, Laura