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First Frost

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First Frost

Feathered friends flee frost
as first flurries flip and flop.
Floating, flying flock
of fair geese transform fading
fall days in fixed formation.

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/13/13
for Francine Roberts' Tanka Me Fall or Winter Contest    

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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 7:17:00 AM
    nicely penned Rhonda....I like the alliterative verses

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 8:22:00 AM
    I like how you did his one. I think it will do well in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 3:22:00 AM
    - Beautiful Rhonda! - Winter is coming crawling here too ..... brrrr ..... cold!! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:56:00 PM
    Wow! This is tremendous, this is a fantastic write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this glorious poem the evening! What an outstanding piece, such a phenomenal poem this one truly is! You have expressed yourself expertly with many words starting wonderfully with the letter 'F', awesome! Great Work!!