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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:48:00 PM

    Cool verse. Memories are flowing so nicely here. like smoke sailing in a breeze. Have a lovely rest of 2013. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Soupmail

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 5:57:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 10:55:00 AM

    Sweet smokey memories Frank. Brings back lost years... would like to do over..

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:50:00 PM

    Thanks for sharing another memory of yours Frank....I can picture you living life to the fullest. Great write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 10:04:00 PM

    Ahhh..yes...this poem is.sexy....congratulations Frank....

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 5:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest,Frank..Great write...Kudos to you....

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 10:05:00 AM

    This has always been an unforgettable poem.........one of the best on the soup! Congratulations are well deserved !!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Creative write, Frank. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 8:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on the fine win, Frank

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 6:35:00 PM

    I agree with andrea below - bittersweet nostalgia is a forte of yours; you know I like this one...you don't enter many contests, frank, but when you do it's nice to see your poems receiving just recognition - congrats on the top spot win :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:17:00 PM

    I was thinking this was one of yours I 'd recently read, but no, I have no comment here. It's EXCELLENT and brings that bitter sweet nostalgia with it that you do so well.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:15:00 PM

    HEY this is awesome, Frank. I get to share a place with YOU this time. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Hello Frank, wow.. Nice surprise, coming from you... , thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ Irma LINDA

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:44:00 PM

    It's my turn Frank, y'all skipped me... A fun rhyme down memory lane!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Great title and poem of a snapshot of memory lane.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:32:00 AM

    Loved this one Frank! It feels as if I was right there! luv,Deb

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:53:00 AM

    Great write Frankie...You can always make the reader see and feel what you experienced....Well, maybe not FEEL everything ;-) Loved this....hugs

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:51:00 AM

    AWESOME....did you roll the pack up in the sleeve of..your white T???...James Dean?? Wow...:-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 6:49:00 AM

    I remember this one too...I'm going to put a lock on your poems, frank, so you can't remove them any more! haha they're already locked in my heart anyway...:)