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  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:45:00 PM
    This surely describes the seasonal change. The past couple of days fit well with your second line. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Very nice and wishes for the contest...luv,Deb

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Yes, yesterday and today's weather are sure signs of winter is freezing out! We have a temperature of 20 degrees right now and with snow on the ground already! Winter is surely rearing its ugly head and I for one am loving it, although I wish autumn would stay around a little longer! We are due to have a warm up though, fall will still be with us for awhile! This is a creative Tanka Sara, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 5:48:00 AM
    - Autumn sharp breath is over .... winter has taken its place - beautiful (and sad) Sara! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)