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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 1:14:00 AM

    the pacing of this story lends itself to a slow-burn unravelling of sensuous affection... great story-teller you are, F J!.. thank you for joining my contest.. i cited your piece ; so beautiful in flow and content..do check my blog if you have time.. a winner in my heart!:) huggs

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/20/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's so sweet Nette, thank you. I'll roll by and see what's on your mind ;)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 2:01:00 AM

    This is like the IT of lyrics Flo, words do paint pictures with no paint brushes. Salute.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/13/2013 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Told you you'd like it; I'm glad my husband did...think I impressed him with this one LOL
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Amazing piece. Bow to the master I shall. Surrender I shall not, for strength lies with those that dust off to fight again. For a gem is not polished without rubbing nor a man perfected without challenges. :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/12/2013 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh yea you're talking about nature alright! And whomevers rose petals you're talking about would agree as well I'm sure -.-
    Boy Avatar Nature Boy Date: 11/12/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What? I speaking of the strength of nature and rose petals - lol
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/12/2013 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Okay Gregory Curry, final level because we're not far from porn as it is! lol
    Boy Avatar Nature Boy Date: 11/12/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes you are perfect and yes it was a "slight" burn and AMEN but again not surrendering for only the surface has been tapped :)
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/12/2013 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, but an imperfect man has no ground beneath his feet when standing before an already perfect woman ;) ...you know that was a massive burn right?!! Can I get a AMEN!! Lol thank you Greg...
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 1:00:00 PM

    HELP!!! I just went cross-eyed... SENSUAL??? Uh Yah! Miss Flo... I annoint you the Passion Queen of Poetry Soup! WOO HOO!!!!!!!! Looooooove, Jack xoxox

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/12/2013 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    JACK!! People passing my office must think I'm crazy! Laughing in here alone!! Oh but I soooo love the title you hath bestowed upon me! Thank you Jack Ellis :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Hi F.J., A most sensual write..I liked this one from you.. Ken

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/12/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ken; I hope you were able to read "Hidden in the Rain" first....this is, I guess you would say, the husband's retort ;)