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  1. Date: 2/2/2014 8:36:00 PM
    Thomas your story enraptured me. I love the picture you placed behind my eyes. Thank you

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Thomas, You are indeed a wordsmith. Vivid imagery with a hint of mystery from a golden pen. Best regards, chuck

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:22:00 PM
    I'm glad you explained those words at the end, otherwise I was about to do some Googling lol. Interesting, and the images portrayed are quite vivid, which is an enjoyable quality. It doesn't necessarily "speak" to me, but I appreciate the care and thought that went into this well-expressed piece. Kudos, bud :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Thomas, I did not see this gem! It's beautiful.--- She is one with the moon.--- so romantic.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Hi Thomas, a romantic poem. Like a spell, waiting to be free... Enchanting, one of the finest poems I've read today... Smiles... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:08:00 PM
    sorry I've taken so long to return your comment...this is my first introduction to your work, and what a cracker it is! sensual, dreamy, just lovely...:)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:50:00 AM
    wow, this is one of your very BEST a FAVE on this one!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Brilliant imagery. I felt as if I had been transported to India! Loved it :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Beautiful, like the change and glow of art. Thomas, "Love only haunts those that live there and yearn to feel the rhythm that carries one into the sensual music that exist in every beating heart. Wonderful pen! Thanks for the read! LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 2:40:00 AM
    Beautiful exotic images. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 3:48:00 PM
    Very beautiful, Loved it Thomas....Peter

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:36:00 AM
    this is set the scene and bring it to life nicely...awesome poem :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:23:00 AM
    I have a sudden urge to fly to India. Outstanding imagery, very sensual. You made me feel like a young boy yearning.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Thank you for the history lesson, the beauty, and the music, Maestro, keep writing these scented musical lyrics, Prose or not, they are beautiful, xxx

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 10:44:00 PM
    Thom Another great write of enchantment and charm. The imagery and descriptive way you have penned this touches the readers heart and soul. nice job Hugs Sorry I made you blush with my Trickery poem. That was my intention. LOL

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Very beautifully written, I am mesmerized! Wonderful, exotic poetry, Thomas!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Beautiful....enchanting indeed.