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Smackintheheartkerpow

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Smackintheheartkerpow



There's just no word to describe true love One hasn't been invented till now So I'm going to create one all my own How about smackintheheartkerpow Now I think that sounds just about right That's where I just felt a big jolt Knocked me for a loop, back on me bum As strong as a lightening bolt Do I exaggerate well maybe a tad To your romantic prowess I bow There's really no doubt I've just been jabbed Smackintheheartkerpow © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Jack I'm going to need to know what exactly you're sipping on as you write these because apparently I need to find whatever THAT is! lol I saw the tittle and had to double take then read sloooowly!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/14/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOLOL Well now I can't correct it b/c it wouldn't be funny!! Told you it threw my brain off!! Jack OMGoodness I don't even know what to say!!
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/12/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Did it smack ya kerpow??? Uhhh... "I saw the tittle and..." tittle??? LOL Love "tittles"!!!!!! Big smackeroonies xoxoxox
  1. Date: 11/11/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Always entertaining and always creative Jack---the literary world is ready for a new Theodor Geisel !

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/11/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now that's what I call an honour my friend! To even say our names in the same sentence... WOW! Thank you my friend!!!
  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Mike went with me to a poetry meetup... He's helped me write some... so got to read a few himself... Think the guy over it was not amused by our silliness writting... And when one of his followers said she felt she'd been missing something after hearing ours... Well he looked agast... serious poetry was his thing... I think he wanted to give us a kerpow... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/11/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    In french they have a saying... "chaque un a son gout" (minus the accents)... each to his own taste! xoxoxox