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  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Despite my bias and professed ignorance of this format, I still think it is well-executed. I know not what comprises a good haiku, but I'm sure this must be a paragon of the form. Kudos; bud :)

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    Date: 11/22/2013 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, if that is the criteria, then you hit the proverbial nail on the head and knocked this one out of the park (as we say here in the states; do you guys also employ that idiom?)
  1. Date: 11/16/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Your first Haiku? Masterful! Kudos, Thomas. I love it :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:46:00 PM
    So true! Nothing melts a cold hearted person like warmth, caring, and love. If only it wasn't so hard to find such warmth! :) Another great haiku, I love the metaphors, as well. Nicely done, Tom!...Many thanks for the kind comments!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Beautifully done my friend. Loved your haiku very much and I am waiting for winter here in India. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Thom a sweet and loving write. Full of passion and feeling Nice job Hugs

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:11:00 PM
    I think this one is my favorite of them all.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:32:00 AM
    - A skilled haiku ... a beautiful picture Thomas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)