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  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:15:00 PM
    your pen flows with brilliance Laura...thanks for your kind words

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 9:20:00 AM
    - Laura, a amazing write!! - The imagery captures the reader .... - Deeply with pain ... touching and beautiful - really well done!! -Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Laura, beautiful from start to end... wow..on the imagery... the first butterfly is still tumbling in my mind... very deep... I love how that last stanza wraps it all together, for the lonely ending on this life. i guess death is the best way to escape the pain and lonliness... luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Thank you for all your wonderful comments on all the write The titanic, the hindengurg, the empress of irland by the way more died on her than the titanic even though she had more life boats abored. CHERI

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:55:00 AM
    WOW my friend beautiful is not enough on this poem great second piece to the first write bravo again it moved my soul within. cheri

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Amazing. Painful. Massive. You have such an epic touch to your metaphorical expressions. Damn, what a roller coaster.