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  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:08:00 PM
    an excellent write Laura....

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 11:12:00 AM
    I liked it! I liked it twice! You are a very good writer Laura. :) G.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 9:13:00 AM
    - Wooow ... continued on next ... :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:31:00 PM
    That which 'dies' young provides a great gift to those who can endure, to appreciate - a beautiful sacrafice - I admire the quality and consistency of personality that you have masterly bestowed into Nature Laura - some brilliant sublties as well, such as, 'inner bitter...', and 'dry as Death's gaping mouth...' - superb touch - I wish I had more time to pay you respect and thereby read more of your compositions but I currently have no Internet at home because I don't want to spendthe money on it

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:04:00 AM
    the coldness is killing and creeping on the imagery... Laura, a ghostly feeling floats through the depths of my mind.... many lines I love here.... Absolutely amazing, now moving on to the continued part.. luv~ LINDA

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/12/2013 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your mind is beautiful PD - eternally glad you enjoyed. ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:51:00 AM
    A chilling write but great expresion in the words and lines I like the power and truth in it almost an honesty beyond, Nice but it holds an unlined sadness to it. cheri

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/12/2013 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yessum. You are quite right. I appreciate your review. ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:41:00 AM
    There's a video game I'm creating in my studio that is lightly similar to this atmosphere. Only this is much more potent in its presentation. Incredible. "Alien-crazed lullaby"...indeed. Damn. Off to part 2...!!! =D

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/12/2013 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Drake. That is so cool - didn't know you create games- that's super awesome. Stay sweet. ~Laura