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Extra Ordinary Toilet

It makes me say,' Oh eeew,'
To see a dirty loo.

* not in my house, lol

For Susan's Ordinary contest

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  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:48:00 PM

    Hilarious Jack! Congrats.... I always tidy up my throne after unloading my burdens...

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Ha ha, good one. Congrats.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:01:00 PM

    I knew she would love it a lot more over my free verse writing!! AWESOME and To the POINT. Congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:30:00 PM

    lol,, big congrats on your winning spot, jack.. hugggs

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:29:00 PM

    You are one funny guy. congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:18:00 PM

    great humour Jack congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 1:24:00 PM

    ha ha well done jack , getting there slowly by the way and thanks for asking xx

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 9:43:00 AM

    LoL cannot stand a dirty loo. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 11:19:00 AM

    yipers.. i agree with you 100%.. love the laughing streak, jack.. so , so fine!:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 6:06:00 PM

    Nice, so very not nice. PD says you've published a book, well done. Check out Poets.org, they tweeted me yesterday to tell me of a Walt Whitman prize, worth $5000 to the winner for their first book of poetry, and a months residency at the Vermont Studio Center. I don't know any more than that, apart from the deadline being extended to the 1st Dec. Best of luck.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:15:00 AM

    hahahaaa..

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:36:00 PM

    lol...Jack... that is out of the ordinary... you amazed me with the title alone..... hope you are well? always~ Linda

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Ohh...wonderful.......:-) :-) :-) :-)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 11/10/2013 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind comment today..and good luck in this contest .. this will do well....
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:39:00 PM

    hmmm I'll have to check out this contest LOL Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Ha ha ha, you have written another glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading the excellent and hilarious poem this evening! What an exceptional piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:13:00 PM

    not in my house either...i have seen some pretty bad ones in work places and what not...cute poem....good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 4:47:00 PM

    Susan will love this Jack. Nice going on this great couplet. Thanks for stopping by my work. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..She will probably get a chuckle but that is not what we feel when we go in on a public loo and see d---...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:17:00 PM

    bet Susan loves it TOO

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:16:00 PM

    hahaha, not in my house. Again you pulled it off something so short and EXTRA ordinary!!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Me too Jack. Hope you have a winner here...Peter